Nice
I'm really feeling the techno mix with rock. The na na na goodbye part brings back memories. The singing sounds like green day to me...catchy in a punk rock style song, like this.
Very good effort guys.
Nice
I'm really feeling the techno mix with rock. The na na na goodbye part brings back memories. The singing sounds like green day to me...catchy in a punk rock style song, like this.
Very good effort guys.
General or new age
The song is catchy, especially the drum beat. The song goes new age toward the end with the piano. I like the song though. Good work. Again love the drums.
Thanks buddy, I thought so the piano didn't really fit rock genre, but I'm pleased you liked my first attempt.
Good song..
Good song dude. Constructively try this to improve upon it..
1. Try normalizing the audio, possibly adding some compression and adjusting your mids..it sounds a bit muffled
2. Try adding some more variety to the song. The beat is catchy but repetitious.
3. Keep cranking songs out. You have talent.
thanks for the feedback. im a novice so i still have lots to learn
Masterful singing
You're probably one of the best male vocalists on here for actually singing. Very clean. Nice track.
Catchy short song.
I know it's not an entirely serious song, but it sounds like one. The singing is very impressive, the beat and even vocals are reminiscent of the offspring. I like it. Keep up the good work, hope to hear more music from you.
Not bad...to improve
First off, turn down the bass just a notch or two. Second, add some more variety to the song. I found myself fast forwarding to find changes in tempo and atmosphere. Still it sounds like music to me, so don't give up on making stuff altogether. Good effort.
Cheers man. I was going to down the bass a lot (I know you were being polite :P) but the base file I had for it is missing, so I really couldn't go back to make any changes.
Variety/dynamics is something I'm still getting better at; always had trouble not just repeating certain sections.
Thanks for the positive criticism. :)
I really dig your music guys
Keep up the great work. Both the vocalists I've heard you guys have, both have good voices, although I prefer this singer...
As others said, the rhythm in this song is pretty rocking. I wish you guys had a better mix though. Highs seem a bit overpowering and the vocals a bit low...
Anyways, great job guys. Stay together and you may eventually go far.
haha, what the hell?
You're right, something is wrong with you...you sound like foamy from illwillpress too....
Anyways, this is great....keep it up and whatever you were smoking when you made this, keep it stocked.
haha, thanks man.
This is pretty badass
I'm a huge Metallica fan, not sure I see the reference to their music in this.....sounds more Megadeth to me...love the tone on the guitar, your music is inspiring me to write some much heavier riffs...It's nice to see some people still stay away from thrash and pointless sweep picking appregios...As far as the song itself actually goes, the lyrics are pretty good, voice is impressive as usual, nice vibrato....the riffs are nice...especially going back to the grooving clean riff..Seems like a few extra pinch harmonics would help add meat...
Anyways, solid song dude....Stay true to the metal.
Thanks very much, dude! Glad they can inspire you. I wish I could be inspired to finish the last two songs. haha.
Pinches. I need to do more. This song actually has more than all my others combined. haha.
Anyways, glad you liked it man. Thanks for the listen and review \m/
What is this god awful piece of
beautiful music haha..
Kidding aside, this song is a lot slower than I usually listen to, the parts especially around 4:20 are really catchy, a lot of melodizing, I like it though.
lol
thanks man, ya my style normally reverts around piano songs and techno!
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