nunyabizness's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Eric Freeman - Acoustic]

Nice talent but a few pointers

Songs this long really need some variation, I listened to it a while then began to hear repetitions, a lot. I skipped through sections and it sounded the same. I like the riff, but you need variations, breaks, or bridges. You need to center on a riff and build upon it so that when you do play it over and over, it sounds new and more exciting. I can tell you have talent and I do like your song, but it's either too long or doesn't have enough variation for your length. Keep up the good work though.

EricFreeman responds:

There is variation, but it's very slight. The second time the through there's an underlying synth that gets added. I completely see where you're coming from on how it needs more variation, but this song was just meant as a simple background song used in a movie or something, so I didn't want too much variation or else it might be distracting.

Thanks for listening!

[Metallisha]

I really like this tune but

I would classify this as more of a dance or trance than rock or metal. Aside from that it's very catchy and the music has several breaks with different variations,which is a must if your song is over a minute long. Keep up the good work.

SquattingDog88101 responds:

Thanks for the support. NG wont let me change the genre. Its already used in a flash vid. Weird rule.

[East (Demo 2)]

Nice mood music

I could see this in some type of Indian/Arabian/Persian type game. The composing was pretty solid, kind of wish you would have made it longer and added more more variation.

[Fabricated Son (Final Mix)]

Really Good Work

A couple of things to note, one...I seldom give 10s unless it blows my hair back and can't stop hearing it....doesn't happen often...
But more importantly this song:
1 The music is well executed. Next time you record try turning your mic up more and singing/playing a little louder...it will help eliminate that muffled sound...you will be limited by your mic though...
2. Nice job on the harmonics, they add a lot of soul
3. Turn your vocals up about another 2 dB, especially from 4 minutes on...

Most of these remarks are more on the quality of your tone than the song. I can't knock the song itself much. Sounds like you could get by in a club playing it. Keep up the good work and when you get time be sure to check out our new song.....rock on!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/395087

[Upbeat Jam]

Jamming rhythm track

I like the rhythm track. The lead wasn't bad, but it sounded out of tune, especially on the b/high e bends....
Alround pretty good tune though.

AttackTh3Radical responds:

Yeah I can't bend in tune terribly well, but thanks a lot!

[Terminator Theme Cover]

Not too bad

How long have you been playing? The notes are mostly pretty clean and seem to be in tune. The higher octacte guitar seems to clash with the song though..
The driving last 5 seconds was cool...pretty good interpretation. With a little practice you could make a masterpiece...just keep practicing...

Jehendos responds:

Got the guitar last Oktober but started playing somewhere january.
Yea the harmony in the end is a little bit off tune.
Got an ESP LTD M-10 series wich costs 200 EU (Guitar, Amp, tuner, ect). so its realy cheap. Had to buy an BOSS ME-70 to get a half decent sound out of it.

But thanks for you constructive respone :-)

[Relaxation Loop [SMD]]

That's pretty sweet....

You should make this into a complete song....collab with me or something...riff has a lot of potential..

SmdSkata responds:

If you could write me a PM, and went I get some free time coming up, we can definitely give it a try.

[Dam Failure]

Awesome drums

Song was pretty rocking, loved the drums and the main riff was catchy, kind of Jet style. The solo wasn't bad either. Good job....just try adding some more variety to your riffs...

Pocketpod responds:

well, there's no Solo in it, it's just another riff^^

Thanks for your review.

[Graveheart Industries]

Genre? That's a toughie

Some aspects of it are ambience, some are techno and some are heavy metal. Pretty cool track although it seems a bit drug out in the first half, for my tastes. About 55 seconds in it is starts going pretty metal....I like it though. It may be better received in metal though....but that's just my opinion.

[Shredding Synth]

Not bad for synth

Keep working on it, you have a nice start. Needs to be a bit longer, some more variation and a hook...good start though dude.