nunyabizness's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Back To The Start]

Good song

Vocals are really good as with the other song Whirlwind, I listened to. Vocals seemed a bit overpowering to the guitar though. Again add a little backbone and the song would go from good to great. Good effort.

EL-Poncho responds:

Cheers for the review! Always good to get constructive criticsm

[Whirlwind - Brittany Lascelles]

I like the syncopated riffs

The syncopated stops really set the song off, very energetic and catchy. Toward the end it seems to lose its energy and shifts to something much softer, musically well performed but it loses the energy and captivity the beginning holds. Pretty solid for an effort without bass or drums. Try adding that and you will have one of the better songs on this site.

EL-Poncho responds:

thanks for the review, will take what you said in mind!!

[Undone [DEMO]]

Pretty good

One thing though, turn your highs down, it drowns out the rest, I mostly hear the hats and crashes. Vocals and music are pretty well performed. Just seriously fix the mix and the song will be much better received.

djnet responds:

i actually have a version that i fixed the mix...check it out

[- Incomplete -]

General or new age

The song is catchy, especially the drum beat. The song goes new age toward the end with the piano. I like the song though. Good work. Again love the drums.

DatBoiNC responds:

Thanks buddy, I thought so the piano didn't really fit rock genre, but I'm pleased you liked my first attempt.

[Grey fire]

Good song..

Good song dude. Constructively try this to improve upon it..
1. Try normalizing the audio, possibly adding some compression and adjusting your mids..it sounds a bit muffled
2. Try adding some more variety to the song. The beat is catchy but repetitious.
3. Keep cranking songs out. You have talent.

ktgen responds:

thanks for the feedback. im a novice so i still have lots to learn

[Solemn outro]

Not bad...to improve

First off, turn down the bass just a notch or two. Second, add some more variety to the song. I found myself fast forwarding to find changes in tempo and atmosphere. Still it sounds like music to me, so don't give up on making stuff altogether. Good effort.

BrodWizard responds:

Cheers man. I was going to down the bass a lot (I know you were being polite :P) but the base file I had for it is missing, so I really couldn't go back to make any changes.
Variety/dynamics is something I'm still getting better at; always had trouble not just repeating certain sections.
Thanks for the positive criticism. :)

[Chipmunks and Bad Man Inc]

haha, what the hell?

You're right, something is wrong with you...you sound like foamy from illwillpress too....
Anyways, this is great....keep it up and whatever you were smoking when you made this, keep it stocked.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

haha, thanks man.

[Dirty Cries]

This is pretty badass

I'm a huge Metallica fan, not sure I see the reference to their music in this.....sounds more Megadeth to me...love the tone on the guitar, your music is inspiring me to write some much heavier riffs...It's nice to see some people still stay away from thrash and pointless sweep picking appregios...As far as the song itself actually goes, the lyrics are pretty good, voice is impressive as usual, nice vibrato....the riffs are nice...especially going back to the grooving clean riff..Seems like a few extra pinch harmonics would help add meat...

Anyways, solid song dude....Stay true to the metal.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Thanks very much, dude! Glad they can inspire you. I wish I could be inspired to finish the last two songs. haha.
Pinches. I need to do more. This song actually has more than all my others combined. haha.

Anyways, glad you liked it man. Thanks for the listen and review \m/

[Two Sides to a Moon]

What is this god awful piece of

beautiful music haha..

Kidding aside, this song is a lot slower than I usually listen to, the parts especially around 4:20 are really catchy, a lot of melodizing, I like it though.

MoonlitRaven responds:

lol
thanks man, ya my style normally reverts around piano songs and techno!

[Dundudara Bass]

What are we supposed to be reviewing?

Sounds like you got a bassline into a mp3.....try making a song now, and I can tell ya more about it.

RockBullet responds:

It's that got to shake us in two! mp3 player and my bass guitar, difficulty ta it, sorry