Good job again
Thought the rhythm sounds a lot like the main verse riff for the unforgiven, but it has a little variation so I won't knock it for that.
Biggest thing, like the other guy said is to watch about clashing moments. One technique I have used a couple of times is alternating solos in different octaves with a short overlap as they change. Or if you have a good mixing studio, simply fade a guitar out when it clashes too heavily rather than redo the whole track.
Anyway, keep up the good work, practice makes perfect and noone is perfect.