Nice song
Like has been said before, the levels are a bit low and the progression is a bit slow, but it is a solid song. Practice with some compression on your vocals and guitars the drums are overpowering yet the guitars blend with the vocals a lot...try tweaking on the mastering a little more, but still a good song
What are we supposed to be reviewing?
Sounds like you got a bassline into a mp3.....try making a song now, and I can tell ya more about it.
It's that got to shake us in two! mp3 player and my bass guitar, difficulty ta it, sorry
I agree with Bad Man
You should be proud of your voice, very smooth and in tune. Rare for a male singer...again comparing you to FFDP's singer, very similar with the clean to rasp in mid-note. Also nice vibrato.....
All in all, great job...
Nice voice
You remind me some of of Five Finger Death Punch's singer...
I have considered covering this song on guitar....you would kill it on vocals...
RIP Dio
Fucking epic dude
You killed the vocals on this one...The music is very good too, probably better than the original...Nice to see you tackle a song like this.
On a personal note, I like to hear your voice in this style more than most you've done....if you form a band, you should consider writing for this style of singing...
Thanks man! I've got some back burner stuff, with this style vocals. I have to finish what I started with the album. Two songs left.
Thanks again!
Cool song, but not really rock
I like the song and riff, but the minute or so of guitar in the back was too low and would still put this song in Techno genre... Good song though...relaxing...
If you have time, check out some of our songs, we play classic/alternative rock...
Pretty solid tune
You're drummer loves fills I can tell haha...
The biggest thing would be a better recording setup....sounds like you recorded both with one mic....
Still solid effort.
Hah yeah he likes to keep things interesting during improv... >_>
And I have no "real education" on recording. So I'm pretty much using a mixer, the guitar is direct feed, and an 8-1800 mhz range mic to pick up the drums.
I loved the tone of the guitars
To offer criticism to help you, the drums were out of time in a spot or two, and I'm not crazy about the bend you do right before the verse riff, still a pretty decent cover.The intro is spot on for the guitars, but the transition into the verse got a little sloppy. Like I said, still a good cover.
This one is probably the best you have done....
You may want to consider midi controllers and something like Fruity Loops, use your keyboard, but instead of mic'ing it, straight recording it. One thing that makes this song stand out is like I said in the other review for you, the variation. Keep up the good work.
hey! its you again!!! ya i made this about a year ago before a fruity loops, I actually made this on Guitar World Tour in the GHtunes section, lol. its like a VERY simple music making thing that comes with the game. I also play it n my keyboard, but ya.. I gotta redo this on fruity loops!
Thanks alot! Moonlit Raven
Not my normal style, but nice
Biggest thing I personally would change up is the bass hit for the first 2 minutes, then back in around 3. Adding variety to all parts of the song would help some. Overall very catchy song though. I could see it being played at a club.
ya thanks man, i see for sure that it needs some a better base at the start and around the end thanks to you and the dude below, thanks though just for even bothing with a review!!!! I'll notify you when I get this ungraded!
THanks a bunch, Moonlit Raven
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